Understanding your character is a good way for you to really get into your book and see from another person's perspective. In your response this week, describe your character. Think about and discuss:
-1. your main character's personality
- 2. how they act/behave
- 3. what they look like
- 4. how old they are
- 5 what sort of education do you think that they have
- 6 who their friends and family are
- 7 what their financial (money) situation is
- 8 and what their job is (if they have one)
I am still reading Bear stone by Will Hobbs. My main character name is Cloyd, he is a loner and a trouble maker at the beginning of the book but then he turns into a very nice person. You can see the way Cloyd look like in the front cover of the book,he is wearing blue jeans and a white shirt, and he has long hair. I don't know exactly how old is Cloyd. I think he only finish the elementary school because he gets sent to work on a farm. Cloyd's friend is Walter: Walter is an old man who owns a farm bordering a mountainside, who is a new widower, and is given the responsibility to keep track of cloyd.
Once Cloyd gets sent to the farm his financial situation change because he doesn't live with the trive anymore. Cloyd job is to take care of the horse in the farm. Rusty is a bear hunter.
I am still reading Bear stone by Will Hobbs. My main character name is Cloyd, he is a loner and a trouble maker at the beginning of the book but then he turns into a very nice person. You can see the way Cloyd look like in the front cover of the book,he is wearing blue jeans and a white shirt, and he has long hair. I don't know exactly how old is Cloyd. I think he only finish the elementary school because he gets sent to work on a farm. Cloyd's friend is Walter: Walter is an old man who owns a farm bordering a mountainside, who is a new widower, and is given the responsibility to keep track of cloyd.
Once Cloyd gets sent to the farm his financial situation change because he doesn't live with the trive anymore. Cloyd job is to take care of the horse in the farm. Rusty is a bear hunter.
Julio,
ReplyDelete1) I could barely read this because it is gray type on a black background. You need to change this to something that people can read.
2) Where is your evidence to support your thinking? How do you think that would change your response?
3) What tools could you have used to make sure that you are spell-checking your work before you publish it for final grading?
Grade: 4 PP-
Next steps: Make sure that you are using the tools available to you to check your spelling and mechanics. Also, support you thinking with evidence from the text. This is what your notes are for!